Tuesday, 4 November 2014

100 Word Challenge-Week Four writing.

We have been enjoying crafting 100 word stories. This week our prompt was '...as it shivered, they...'

Here are some of the stories that were shared today in class (all stories were written in just 20 minutes!)

We wanted to leave. We didn't belong here. I have a feeling we were meant to explore the horrible black ship. I will never know.
They sent me out into the big wide ocean, we swam around. What was I meant to do? Why were we sent? I looked back at the small marooned boat floating in the sea. The ones on the boat gestured towards the black ship ahead of me. I swam forward and put my drenched hand on the ship's side.
The boat shivered. Can a boat shiver?
As it shivered, they stared at me. Why look at me? Just questions that need answers.

By Charlotte.

I float down slowly to the ground, the wind supports me as I look down. Sinking gracefully downwards I see a cherry blossom. A group of children approach us at a speedy pace. I  reach out to touch it but it's too late. As it shivered, they trampled it carelessly. Once the children had passed all that was left was a pink splodge on the pavement. I felt so helpless. After a while of mourning I allowed the wind to take me away. For days I floated until finally I crumpled and shattered like a leaf. Is that all I was. A leaf.

By Carys

I woke up and my back was hurting and I looked -wow they were silver and gold wings. I had a dream about me floating. Oh wait that must mean I could fly so I got onto the window sill and thought 'how can I fly?' Then I remembered that the only way it will work when it's cold so I waited for ten minutes. I was cold, same as the wings, as it shivered, they suddenly leaped into the air and started flapping like crazy it was true. I was flying through..I smacked into a tall tower. Ka Splat!

By Zavier

I felt the presence of someone else. Fear and anxiety was filling the room. Someone else was here. Everything was pitch black. Everything was silent, but I could feel something, something strange. Momentarily I had a mental picture of it. Not a human. not an animal. It was something else altogether. Suddenly a trapdoor was released and I was falling, plunging into darkness. At this moment I had another picture. Stuck in a cage, freezed. Three evil scientist keeping it as a prisoner. As it shivered they they just laughed and chatted between them. I wanted to help it, but all I could see was black.

By Olivia

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